Order for Recorders 600字高中英语作文

　　订购信:订购录音机-Placing an Order for Recorders订购录音机

　　【内容提示】

　　请你先阅读下面一封来信。假定你是信中的Mr. Zhang，请你根据信中的内容写一封回信。信中应包括下列要点：

　　①收到来信，表示感谢。

　　②表示对新型AW----501录音机感兴趣。

　　③拟购10台录音机，询问价格可否降低（cut down the price）。

　　④拟于二十六日前往贵公司看货。

　　来信

　　Beijing Branch

　　Matsushita Co. Ltd

　　Fuxing Road, Beijing

　　Feb. 16, 199___

　　Dear Mr Zhang,

　　We are told that you are head of your school. I am writing to you because we have a new type of recorder for sale and wonder if you would like to buy it.

　　The model is AW----501 and it was produced only one year ago. We would be happy to sell it to you for 560 yuan. That is the cheapest one of the same kind on sale.

　　If you are interested in it, please write to me at the above address. Could you suggest a time when it would suit you to visit us and try out the machine?

　　I look forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Ming

　　Sales Manager

　　【作文示范】

　　Placing an Order for Recorders

　　Zhongshan Middle School

　　143 Zhongshan Road

　　Haidian, Beijing, 400060

　　Feb. 20, 199___

　　Dear Mr Li,

　　Thank you for your letter of Feb. 16. We are interested in your new type of recorder, AW----501. We plan to buy 10 sets of this type. But the price seems a little high. We wonder if you could cut down the price to ￥530 for each. If so, we would go and visit you on Feb. 26. Is the date suitable for you? Please reply as soon as possible.

　　Yours truly,

　　Zhang Ying

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　　订购信:订购录音机-Placing an Order for Recorders

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