高一英语作文：A Shining Star 600字高中英语作文

　　A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior middle school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.

　　When I began my senior middle school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation.I could not get high marks and grammar was not right at all.Afraid of being lanughed at,I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class.When Miss Li found out my situation,she encouraged me and lent me a hand,which rapidly improved my English.With her help,I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.

　　Miss Li,like a shining star,shines in my path of success.

Growing Pains

　　洪江市黔阳一中高一（16）班 向丽君

　　There are a lot of conflicts between our parents and us. For example, when I surf the Internet in my spare time, Mom always shouts at me instead of comforting me. They are too nervous about my grades. In order to please them, I have to spend three hours doing my homework every day. What’s more, I have no chance to talk with them. I am too tired.

　　I really can't stand. I want to say: I do know the best way to please parents is to devote ourselves to study. However, I also need my own way to relax myself. chatting on line is a way to relax myself especially when I was in low spirits. I hope they can give me more support and encouragement.

　　教师点评：

　　这篇作文，用简洁的语言描述了自己与父母之间的小矛盾，同时，叙说了自己的一些想法，希望能得到父母的理解与支持。可以看出，作者作文工底扎实。能学以致用，许多短语都是牛津版高一模块一才学的，例如： devote onself to (doing) sth.; the best way to do sth is to do等。同时，surf the internet; in one's spare time;instead of doing; have no chance to do sth.; relax oneself; be in low spirits; give sb. more support and encouragement这些短语也用得恰当好处。其中，for example; in order to;what's more这些连接词也给文章增色不少。

　　教师简介：

　　杨桂莲，湖南省洪江市黔阳一中英语教师，中教一级。2004年毕业于中南大学英语专业。2008年获全国中小学英语教师技能竞赛二等奖。辅导学生参加全国英语奥林匹克竞赛多次获全国一、二等到奖；所写论文4次获湖南省二等奖，所制作课件多次获湖南省二、三等奖。注重学生学习兴趣的激发和培养，深受学生喜爱。

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