五年级英语作文：a photo of my f 600字五年级作文

　　This is a photo of my family.It was taken in the Ocean Park by a tourist last year.Look!People who is in the picture is smiling!

　　The woman who is standing in the front is my mother .She is young.She is a teacher of Liannan Primary School.The man who is near that building is my father .He is a doctor.He works very hard.He often tells us:"Money isn't almighty .Money can buy a lot of things but knowledge, precious time, true love and so on.If a man has none of this ,though he has a lot of money,he is still poor.So I don't wat you to be like this!"

　　That boy sitting in the middle is me ! I study in Liannan Primary School.I like reading and playing basketball.

　　This is my family.We are happy family!

我和英语

　　在我学的课程当中英语成绩是最不好的，唉！我以后要怎么办。

　　有一次我问我的爸爸，“为什么我的英语总是学不好，而我的数学却学得顶呱呱呢？”我的爸爸回答说：“不是你学不好而是你偏科而已。”爸爸又说：“英语是世界上最广泛应用的语言，汉语只有我们中国人在用，你们下一代是要走向世界的，只有有了语言的沟通，你们才能和美国、英国、法国、加拿大等等许许多多国家里的少年英才们互相沟通，互相学习，把我们的世界建设的更加美好，不学习英语怎么能行呢？”

　　我仔细想了想，我之所以没有把英语学好，是因为我没有认识到它的重要性。我再不好好学英语，等我长大后走向未来时，我就成为了外国人眼中的文盲，他们就会瞧不起我，而我是祖国的未来，我怎能为我们国家去丢人！

　　我对爸爸说：“我一定要把英语学好，为我们祖国争光！”

　　我看到爸爸满意的笑了……

　　河北武矿山西石门五年级：郝浩东

　　点评：作者意识到了英语的重要性之后，英语成绩一定会好起来。文章在表达上，可以多些细节描写，入英语学不好的种种表现，这样比纯粹说理更能打动读者的心灵。

　　点评老师：陶流林