英语四六级写作高分句型 400字高中英语作文

　　英语四六级写作高分句型

　　一、句子开头多样化

　　英语是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架，许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写句子。这样写倒是无可非议，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同样结构的句子，就显得呆板生硬，缺乏生气了。事实上，在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外，许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。

　　例句：Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time passes.

　　上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式：

　　As time passes, women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society.

　　2. To take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time passes.

　　二、避免一个I写到底

　　初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个I写到底，句首僵硬，缺乏变化。

　　试读下面这段文章：

　　One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little plot. I love it and take care of it well. I loved especially to grow peas. I was proud when we had them on our table. I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up. I would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury them.

　　上面这一段共用了八个I。当然上文若出自一个幼童笔下，倒不乏天真纯朴的趣味。不妨改写如下： According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little plot. I love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of peas. Having them on the table made me proud. I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying them.

　　改写后的段落仅有三个I，一看就出自成人手笔。

　　三、 注意句子的紧凑性

　　1. 当两个句子是围绕着同一主题的不同方面进行说明时，可以将两句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，从而使句子更加紧凑。这也就是省略结构所表达出的英文的紧凑性。需要注意的是两句中形成对应关系的something要完全一致才可以省略，而且与相同成分相关的'短语不可以省略。另外，如果表示比较结构的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短语修饰，后面的相同成分要由代词来置换，而不能直接将其省略。

　　例句： They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the society.

　　他们不仅要从书本中学习知识，还要从社会中汲取知识。

　　Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or well be .或者赛丽对此事负责，或者由我们来承担责任。

　　The population of this country is three times as large as that of its neighbor.

　　这个国家的人口是它邻国的三倍。

　　2. 条件句也是使句子紧凑的一种表达方式。这里我们介绍一下in which在条件句中的用法，它相当于条件句的引导词if，这时可译作如果...那么...或当...时。

　　例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that concert.

　　当另外一个乐团演奏A时，那麽演奏B的乐团就有充分的理由不去彩排了。

小王子英语读后感及翻译

　　小王子英语读后感及翻译

　　当细细品完一本名著后，你有什么体会呢？这时最关键的读后感不能忘了哦。那么你会写读后感吗？下面是小编为大家整理的小王子英语读后感及翻译，希望能够帮助到大家。

　　"Its like a flower.". If you fall in love with a flower growing on a star, then at night you look at the sky and feel sweet and happy, and all the stars seem to be in bloom."

　　When I first read "Little Prince", I was attracted by his fresh writing style and pure world at high school. Now six years later, read the "Little Prince", can not help but again and again to tears, and palpitation for Princes mind be sad, moved by his pure and persistent love, for his innocence and mourning gradually to disappear. As the author of St. Erik Marcus Paley said in the preface, he put the fairy tale "to Leon? Wirth, when he was a boy"

　　This is an adult fairy tale, which belongs to the once innocence adults fairy tale, the children can not understand the little prince biting sadness and heavy. They should not be aware of this too early. They should enjoy a good time in a sunny world. It is not so much a fairy tale, but a tragedy. The hero in the fairy tale always looks like snow white or Cinderella, and lives happily. The little prince was sad to see that in the meaning of love after death in the desert.

　　The plot of the novel is very simple, mainly from the "I" point of view about the princes journey. For a beautiful and fragile rose, the little prince left has been a quiet life of the B-612 small swimming star, he has traveled six planet in the planet, he encountered some he felt very unreasonable than adults, proud as Lucifer king, mad about money merchants, pedantic lamplighter...... So he continued to sigh, "adults world is really strange."." Here the author of the little prince childs eyes, see these peoples empty, blind and foolish, as a adult lonely, no one can follow the situation.

　　At last he came to earth. Here he met a fox, the fox to he solved that one fragile little rose brought him to love the doubts, make him understand, love means responsibility, compassion means, with love (generalized love) in the life all have meaning. The fox told him: "for you to tame things, you always have the responsibility. Do your duty to your rose." "If you make me tame, my life will be full of sunshine, cheerful. Im going to hear a different kind of footsteps....... You have blond hair, so once you make me tame, it will become the golden wheat will be too wonderful for words! Reminds me of you. I will love the wind through the wheat......" Love makes man understand sorrow and sorrow, and at the same time makes man free from loneliness and make life full of spice and meaning. Just as the little prince said to me, "its like a flower.". If you fall in love with a flower growing on a star, then at night you look at the sky and feel sweet and happy, and all the stars seem to be in bloom." So the author knew that it was no big deal for a sheep to eat a flower in the world, but for the little prince, it was like all the stars were extinguished in an instant."

　　Finally, the little prince left his planet in 1st anniversary on the occasion, let the poisonous snake him, so he can get rid of the weight of the body, back to the B-612 small swimming star back to his pride and fragile rose side. The little prince was gone, like a little match girl, flying to the world where his grandmother was without cold and hunger, and he ran to his eternal love. The world was left with only the golden wheat fields and the insignificant roses of a garden. And we cry in vain. And we like to be tame fox, to miss the little prince in the golden hair. Because the little prince, I believe that the desert indeed hiding wells, because the little prince he heard voices in the wind in the desert, and drink that beautiful spring.

　　【翻译】

　　“这就象花一样。如果你爱上了一朵生长在一颗星星上的花，那么夜间，你看着天空就感到甜蜜愉快，所有的星星上都好象开着花。”

　　第一次读《小王子》，是在高中的时候，一下子就被他那清新的文笔和单纯的世界所吸引。六年后的现在，再读《小王子》，不禁一次次地流泪，为小王子那慑人心魂的忧伤而心悸，为他纯洁而执着的爱所感动，也为自己那逐渐泯灭的童心而哀悼。正象作者圣-埃克絮佩利在序言里面说的，他把这个童话“献给雷昂?维尔特，当他还是一个小男孩的时候”

　　这是一个属于成人的童话，属于曾经有过童心的成年人的童话，孩子们是无法体会小王子彻骨的忧伤和爱的沉重的。他们也不应该过早地体会这些，他们应该在阳光明媚的世界里享受着快乐的时光。这与其说是一个童话，不如说是一个悲剧。童话里的主人公总是像白雪公主或灰姑娘一样，幸福美满地生活。而忧伤的小王子却在发见爱的真谛后死在沙漠里。

　　小说的`情节很简单，主要是从“我”的角度讲述小王子的游历过程。因为一朵美丽而娇气的玫瑰，小王子离开了一直平静地生活着的B-612小游星，他先后游历了六个星球，在这些星球上，他遇到一些他觉得很不可理逾的大人，狂妄自大的国王，财迷心窍的商人、迂腐的点灯人……于是他不断的感慨，“大人的世界确实奇怪。”在这里作者以小王子的孩子式的眼光，透视出这些大人们的空虚、盲目和愚妄，也道出了成人的孤独寂寞、无可适从的处境。

　　最后他来到了地球。在这里他遇到了一只狐狸，这只狐狸给他解决了那朵娇气的小玫瑰给他带来的对爱的疑惑，使他明白，爱意味着责任，意味着慈悲，有了爱(广义的爱)生活里的一切才有了意义。狐狸告诉他：“对于你使之驯顺的东西，你永远有责任。你要对你的玫瑰尽责。”“如果你使我驯顺了，我的生活就会充满阳光，欢快起来。我将会听出一种与众不同的脚步声。…….你有着一头金发，于是，一旦你使我驯顺了，这将变得妙不可言!金色的小麦将使我回想起你来。于是我就会爱上穿行麦浪的风声……”爱使人懂得了忧伤和痛苦，同时使人摆脱了孤独寂寞，使生活变得有充满情趣和意义。正象小王子对“我”说的：“这就象花一样。如果你爱上了一朵生长在一颗星星上的花，那么夜间，你看着天空就感到甜蜜愉快，所有的星星上都好象开着花。”于是作者明白，这世界上，一只小绵羊吃掉一朵花儿，是没什么大不了的`事，但对于小王子来说，“那就如同所有的星星顷刻间都熄灭。”

　　最后，小王子在离开他的星球一周年之际，让毒蛇咬死了他，这样他可以“摆脱躯体的重量”，回到他的B-612小游星，回到他的骄傲而脆弱的玫瑰身边。小王子走了，就象买火柴的小姑娘飞向与奶奶在一起的没有寒冷没有饥饿的世界一样，他奔向他永恒的爱。留给这世界的只是金色的麦田和一园子无关紧要的玫瑰花。还有我们在徒劳地哭泣。而我们就象渴望被驯顺的狐狸一样，对着麦田思念着小王子金色的头发。因为小王子，我相信沙漠里确实藏着水井，因为小王子他听到辘轳在风中的声音，并饮了那令荒漠变得美丽的甘泉。